Mosiah 27:10
1830 Edition
And now it came to pass that while he was going about to destroy the church of God: for he did go about secretly with the sons of Mosiah, seeking to destroy the church, and to lead astray the people of the Lord, contrary to the commandments of God, or even the king;
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Simple English
He was going around trying to destroy God’s church. He went secretly with Mosiah’s sons. They tried to destroy the church and lead God’s people the wrong way. This was against God’s rules and even the king’s rules.
Paraphrase
While he was working to destroy the church—going around secretly with Mosiah’s sons, trying to ruin the church and lead God’s people astray, against both God’s commands and the king’s—
Notes
In Joseph Smith's Plagiarism of the Bible in the Book of Mormon, Jerald and Sandra Tanner list at least 17 significant parallels between the Apostle Paul in the Bible and Alma in the Book of Mormon.
Both Alma and Paul were very wicked men before their conversation (Compare Mosiah 27:8 with 1 Timothy 1:12-13).
Both Alma and Paul were out on one of their missions of persecution on the day of their conversion (Compare Mosiah 27:10-11 with Acts 26:11-13).
In both cases of Alma and Paul's conversion, the people present fell to the earth. (Compare Mosiah 27:12 with Acts 26:14).
In the vision which followed, both Alma and Paul were asked why they fought against the work of the Lord (Compare Mosiah 27:13 with Acts 9:43).
Both Alma and Paul became helpless after the vision and had to be helped by their friends (Compare Mosiah 27:19 with Acts 9:8).
Both Alma and Paul went without food for a period of time (Compare Mosiah 27:23 with Acts 9:9).
Both Alma and Paul were converted to the Lord (Compare Mosiah 27:23-24 with Acts 9:18).
After their conversation, both Alma and Paul traveled about preaching the Word of God (Compare Mosiah 27:32 with Acts 9:20).
Other parallels between Paul and Alma can be found at: Alma 36:6, Alma 36:14, Alma 30:32, Alma 15:11, Alma 14:22, Alma 14:26, Alma 14:27, Alma 14:28