The Book of Mormon

1 Nephi 18:23

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that after we had sailed for the space of many days, we did arrive to the promised land; and we went forth upon the land, and did pitch our tents; and we did call it the promised land.

Changes

And it came to pass that after we had sailed for the space of many days, we did arrive ato the promised land; and we went forth upon the land, and did pitch our tents; and we did call it the promised land.

Simple English

After we sailed for many days, we arrived at the promised land. We went onto the land and set up our tents. We called it the promised land.

Paraphrase

After sailing for many more days, we finally reached the promised land. We went ashore, set up our tents, and named it the promised land.