Mormon 2:11
1830 Edition
Thus there began to be a mourning and a lamentation in all the land, because of these things; and more especially among the people of Nephi.
Changes
Thus there began to be a mourning and a lamentation in all the land, because of these things;, and more especially among the people of Nephi.
Simple English
So there was sadness and crying all over the land because of these things. This was especially true among the Nephites.
Paraphrase
Grief and mourning spread everywhere, especially among the Nephites.