Ether 9:35

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that when they had humbled themselves sufficiently before the Lord, the Lord did send rain upon the face of the earth, and the people began to revive again, and there began to be fruit in the north countries, and in all the countries round about. And the Lord did shew forth his power unto them, in preserving them from famine.

Changes

And it came to pass that when they had humbled themselves sufficiently before the Lord, the ~~Lord~~ did send rain upon the face of the earth,; and the people began to revive again, and there began to be fruit in the north countries, and in all the countries round about. And the Lord did sheow forth his power unto them, in preserving them from famine.

Simple English

When they had humbled themselves enough before the Lord, the Lord sent rain on the earth. The people started to get better. Fruit started to grow in the north and in all the lands around. The Lord showed his power to them by keeping them from dying of hunger.

Paraphrase

When they had humbled themselves enough before the Lord, he sent rain. The people began to recover. Crops started growing again in the northern regions and all around. The Lord showed his power by saving them from starvation.