The Book of Mormon

Ether 15:6

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that the people repented not of their iniquity; and the people of Coriantumr were stirred up to anger against the people of Shiz; and the people of Shiz were stirred up to anger against the people of Coriantumr; wherefore the people of Shiz did give battle unto the people of Coriantumr.—

Changes

And it came to pass that the people repented not of their iniquity; and the people of Coriantumr were stirred up to anger against the people of Shiz; and the people of Shiz were stirred up to anger against the people of Coriantumr; wherefore, the people of Shiz did give battle unto the people of Coriantumr.

Simple English

But the people didn’t stop doing wrong. Coriantumr’s people became angry at Shiz’s people. And Shiz’s people became angry at Coriantumr’s people. So Shiz’s people fought against Coriantumr’s people.

Paraphrase

But the people refused to turn away from their sins. Coriantumr’s people became furious with Shiz’s people, and Shiz’s people became furious right back. The battle lines were drawn again.