Ether 15:5
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that when Shiz had received his epistle, he wrote an epistle unto Coriantumr, that if he would give himself up, that he might slay him with his own sword, that he would spare the lives of the people.
Changes
And it came to pass that when Shiz had received his epistle, he wrote an epistle unto Coriantumr, that if he would give himself up, that he might slay him with his own sword, that he would spare the lives of the people.
Simple English
When Shiz got his letter, he wrote back to Coriantumr. He said if Coriantumr would give himself up, Shiz would kill him with his own sword. Then he would stop hurting the people.
Paraphrase
When Shiz got the letter, he wrote back with his own terms: If Coriantumr would surrender himself to be killed by Shiz’s own sword, then he’d spare everyone else.