The Book of Mormon

Ether 15:23

1830 Edition

and on the morrow they fought again; and when the night came they had all fallen by the sword, save it were fifty and two of the people of Coriantumr, and sixty and nine of the people of Shiz.

Changes

aAnd on the morrow they fought again; and when the night came they had all fallen by the sword, save it were fifty and two of the people of Coriantumr, and sixty and nine of the people of Shiz.

Simple English

The next day they fought again. When night came, almost everyone had been killed by the sword. Only 52 of Coriantumr’s people and 69 of Shiz’s people were left.

Paraphrase

The next day they fought again. By nightfall, almost everyone had been killed. Only fifty-two of Coriantumr’s people and sixty-nine of Shiz’s people were left standing.