1 Nephi 8:27
1830 Edition
and it was filled with people, both old and young, both male and female; and their manner of dress was exceeding fine; and they were in the attitude of mocking and pointing their fingers towards those which had come at, and were partaking of the fruit.
Changes
Simple English
It was filled with people, both old and young, both men and women. They wore very fancy clothes. They were making fun of and pointing at those who had come and were eating the fruit.
Paraphrase
“The building was packed with people—young and old, men and women, all dressed in expensive clothes. They were laughing and pointing at those eating the fruit.”