The Book of Mormon

1 Nephi 7:22

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that we did come down unto the tent of our father. And after that I and my brethren, and all the house of Ishmael, had come down unto the tent of my father, they did give thanks unto the Lord their God; and they did offer sacrifice and burnt offerings unto him.

Changes

And it came to pass that we did come down unto the tent of our father. And after that I and my brethren, and all the house of Ishmael, had come down unto the tent of my father, they did give thanks unto the Lord their God; and they did offer sacrifice and burnt offerings unto him.

Simple English

We came down to our father’s tent. After my brothers, all of Ishmael’s family, and I came to my father’s tent, they gave thanks to the Lord their God. They offered sacrifices and burnt offerings to him.

Paraphrase

When we all arrived—my brothers, me, and Ishmael’s entire family—everyone thanked God. We offered sacrifices and burnt offerings to him.