The Book of Mormon

1 Nephi 11:13

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that I looked and beheld the great city Jerusalem, and also other cities. And I beheld the city of Nazareth; and in the city of Nazareth I beheld a virgin, and she was exceeding fair and white.

Changes

And it came to pass that I looked and beheld the great city of Jerusalem, and also other cities. And I beheld the city of Nazareth; and in the city of Nazareth I beheld a virgin, and she was exceedingly fair and white.

Simple English

Then I looked and saw the great city Jerusalem and other cities. I saw the city of Nazareth. In the city of Nazareth I saw a virgin who was very beautiful and pure.

Paraphrase

Then I saw the great city of Jerusalem and other cities. I saw the city of Nazareth, and there I saw a virgin, incredibly beautiful and radiant.