The Book of Mormon

Mosiah 9:4

1830 Edition

Nevertheless, after many days’ wandering in the wilderness, we pitched our tents in the place where our brethren were slain, which was near to the land of our fathers.

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Nevertheless, after many days’ wandering in the wilderness, we pitched our tents in the place where our brethren were slain, which was near to the land of our fathers.

Simple English

After many days of walking in the wilderness, we set up our tents. We camped where our brothers had been killed. This was close to the land of our fathers.

Paraphrase

After wandering for many days, we camped at the place where our people had been killed, near our fathers’ land.