The Book of Mormon

Mosiah 24:20

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that Alma and his people departed into the wilderness; and when they had travelled all day, they pitched their tents in a valley, and they called the valley Alma, because he led their way in the wilderness;

Changes

And it came to pass that Alma and his people departed into the wilderness; and when they had travelled all day, they pitched their tents in a valley, and they called the valley Alma, because he led their way in the wilderness;.

Simple English

Alma and his people left for the wilderness. After they had walked all day, they set up their tents in a valley. They named the valley Alma because he led them through the wilderness.

Paraphrase

Alma and his people escaped into the wilderness. After traveling all day, they set up their tents in a valley. They called it the valley of Alma, because he had led them through the wilderness.