The Book of Mormon

Moroni 9:7

1830 Edition

And now I write somewhat concerning the sufferings of this people. For according to the knowledge which I have received from Amoron, behold, the Lamanites have many prisoners, which they took from the tower of Sherrizah; and there were men, women and children.

Changes

And now I write somewhat concerning the sufferings of this people. For according to the knowledge which I have received from Amoron, behold, the Lamanites have many prisoners, which they took from the tower of Sherrizah; and there were men, women, and children.

Simple English

I want to write about the suffering of our people. I got news from Amoron. The Lamanites have many prisoners. They took them from the tower of Sherrizah. There were men, women, and children.

Paraphrase

Now let me tell you about the horrors our people are suffering. According to what I learned from Amoron, the Lamanites have taken many prisoners from the tower of Sherrizah—men, women, and children.