The Book of Mormon

Jacob 3:11

1830 Edition

O my brethren, hearken unto my word; arouse the faculties of your soul; shake yourselves, that ye may awake from the slumber of death; and loose yourselves from the pains of hell, that ye may not become Angels to the Devil, to be cast into that lake of fire and brimstone, which is the second death.

Influences

Revelation 21:8 (KJV)
But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.

Changes

O my brethren, hearken unto my words; arouse the faculties of your souls; shake yourselves, that ye may awake from the slumber of death; and loose yourselves from the pains of hell, that ye may not become Aangels to the Ddevil, to be cast into that lake of fire and brimstone, which is the second death.

Simple English

My brothers, listen to my words. Wake up your souls. Shake yourselves. Wake up from the sleep of death. Free yourselves from the pains of hell. Don’t become angels to the Devil. Don’t be thrown into the lake of fire. That is the second death.

Paraphrase

Brothers, listen closely. Wake up your souls. Shake yourselves awake from the sleep of death. Break free from the grip of hell, so you don’t become servants of the devil and get thrown into that lake of fire and brimstone—the second death.