Helaman 7:11
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that there was certain men passing by, and saw Nephi as he was pouring out his soul unto God upon the tower, and they ran and told the people what they had seen; and the people came together in multitudes that they might know the cause of so great mourning for the wickedness of the people.
Changes
And it came to pass that there wasere certain men passing by, and saw Nephi as he was pouring out his soul unto God upon the tower,; and they ran and told the people what they had seen;, and the people came together in multitudes that they might know the cause of so great mourning for the wickedness of the people.
Simple English
Some men passed by and saw Nephi praying to God on the tower. They ran and told people what they saw. Many people came together. They wanted to know why he was so sad about the people’s evil.
Paraphrase
Some people walking by saw Nephi pouring out his soul to God on the tower. They ran and told others what they’d seen. Soon a large crowd gathered, curious about why there was such great mourning over the people’s wickedness.