Ether 9:23
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that Coriantum did walk in the steps of his father, and did build many mighty cities, and did administer that which was good unto his people, in all his days. And it came to pass that he had no children, even until he was exceeding old.
Changes
And it came to pass that Coriantum did walk in the steps of his father, and did build many mighty cities, and did administer that which was good unto his people, in all his days. And it came to pass that he had no children, even until he was exceedingly old.
Simple English
Coriantum followed his father’s ways. He built many great cities. He gave his people good things all his days. He had no children until he was very old.
Paraphrase
Coriantum followed his father’s example. He built many great cities and ruled his people well all his days. But he had no children, even when he was very old.