The Book of Mormon

Ether 8:7

1830 Edition

And now Jared became exceeding sorrowful because of the loss of the kingdom, for he had set his heart upon the kingdom, and upon the glory of the world.

Changes

And now Jared became exceedingly sorrowful because of the loss of the kingdom, for he had set his heart upon the kingdom, and upon the glory of the world.

Simple English

Jared became very sad because he lost the kingdom. He had really wanted to be king. He loved having power and glory.

Paraphrase

Jared was crushed. He’d lost the kingdom he craved—the power, the glory, all of it.