The Book of Mormon

Ether 7:4

1830 Edition

And when Corihor was thirty and two years old, he rebelled against his father, and went over and dwelt in the land of Nehor; and he begat sons and daughters; and they became exceeding fair; wherefore Corihor drew away many people after him.

Changes

And when Corihor was thirty and two years old, he rebelled against his father, and went over and dwelt in the land of Nehor; and he begat sons and daughters;, and they became exceedingly fair; wherefore Corihor drew away many people after him.

Simple English

When Corihor was thirty-two years old, he turned against his father. He went and lived in the land of Nehor. He had sons and daughters. They were beautiful. Many people followed Corihor.

Paraphrase

When Corihor turned thirty-two, he rebelled against his father and moved to the land of Nehor. He had sons and daughters there, and they were strikingly beautiful. People flocked to follow him.