Ether 6:9
1830 Edition
and they did sing praises unto the Lord; yea, the brother of Jared did sing praises unto the Lord, and he did thank and praise the Lord all the day long; and when the night came, they did not cease to praise the Lord.
Changes
Simple English
They sang songs of praise to the Lord. The brother of Jared sang praises to the Lord. He thanked and praised the Lord all day long. When night came, they did not stop praising the Lord.
Paraphrase
They sang praises to the Lord. The brother of Jared sang praises and thanked the Lord all day long. And when night came, they still didn’t stop praising him.