The Book of Mormon

Ether 2:13

1830 Edition

And now I proceed with my record: for behold it came to pass that the Lord did bring Jared and his brethren forth even to that great sea which divideth the lands. And as they came to the sea, they pitched their tents; and they called the name of the place Moriancumer; and they dwelt in tents; and dwelt in tents upon the seashore for the space of four years.

Changes

And now I proceed with my record:; for behold, it came to pass that the Lord did bring Jared and his brethren forth even to that great sea which divideth the lands. And as they came to the sea, they pitched their tents; and they called the name of the place Moriancumer; and they dwelt in tents;, and dwelt in tents upon the seashore for the space of four years.

Simple English

Now I continue with my story. The Lord brought Jared and his brothers to the great sea that divides the lands. When they came to the sea, they set up their tents. They called the place Moriancumer. They lived in tents by the sea for four years.

Paraphrase

Now back to my story: The Lord brought Jared and his brother all the way to the great sea that divides the lands. When they reached the shore, they set up their tents and called the place Moriancumer. They camped there by the sea for four years.