The Book of Mormon

Ether 15:9

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that they fought an exceeding sore battle, in the which Coriantumr was wounded again, and he fainted with the loss of blood.

Changes

And it came to pass that they fought an exceedingly sore battle, in the which Coriantumr was wounded again, and he fainted with the loss of blood.

Simple English

They fought a very hard battle. Coriantumr was hurt again. He passed out because he lost so much blood.

Paraphrase

They fought a brutal battle. Coriantumr was wounded again and passed out from blood loss.