The Book of Mormon

Ether 15:28

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that when the men of Coriantumr had received sufficient strength, that they could walk, they were about to flee for their lives, but behold, Shiz arose, and also his men, and he swore in his wrath that he would slay Coriantumr, or he would perish by the sword;

Changes

And it came to pass that when the men of Coriantumr had received sufficient strength, that they could walk, they were about to flee for their lives,; but behold, Shiz arose, and also his men, and he swore in his wrath that he would slay Coriantumr, or he would perish by the sword;.

Simple English

When Coriantumr’s men got strong enough to walk, they tried to run away to save their lives. But Shiz woke up, and his men did too. He swore in his anger that he would kill Coriantumr, or he would die trying.

Paraphrase

When Coriantumr’s men had recovered enough strength to walk, they tried to escape. But Shiz and his men got up too. Shiz swore in fury that he would kill Coriantumr or die trying.