The Book of Mormon

Ether 14:30

1830 Edition

And it came to pass that Shiz smote upon Coriantumr, that he gave him many deep wounds. And Coriantumr having lost his blood, fainted, and was carried away as though he were dead.

Changes

And it came to pass that Shiz smote upon Coriantumr, that he gave him many deep wounds.; Aand Coriantumr, having lost his blood, fainted, and was carried away as though he were dead.

Simple English

Shiz hit Coriantumr and gave him many deep wounds. Coriantumr lost a lot of blood. He fainted and was carried away. He looked like he was dead.

Paraphrase

Shiz struck Coriantumr with deep, terrible wounds. Coriantumr lost so much blood that he collapsed. His men carried him away like a corpse.