Ether 14:30
~600 BC
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that Shiz smote upon Coriantumr, that he gave him many deep wounds. And Coriantumr having lost his blood, fainted, and was carried away as though he were dead.
Influences
John 11:25 (KJV)
Jesus said unto her, I am the resurrection, and the life: he that believeth in me, though he were dead, yet shall he live:
Changes
And it came to pass that Shiz smote upon Coriantumr, that he gave him many deep wounds.; Aand Coriantumr, having lost his blood, fainted, and was carried away as though he were dead.
Simple English
Shiz hit Coriantumr and gave him many deep wounds. Coriantumr lost a lot of blood. He fainted and was carried away. He looked like he was dead.
Paraphrase
Shiz struck Coriantumr with deep, terrible wounds. Coriantumr lost so much blood that he collapsed. His men carried him away like a corpse.