Ether 14:28
~600 BC
1830 Edition
and they pitched their tents in the valley of Corihor. And Coriantumr pitched his tents in the valley of Shurr. Now the valley of Shurr was near the hill Comnor; wherefore Coriantumr did gather his armies together, upon the hill Comnor, and did sound a trumpet unto the armies of Shiz, to invite them forth to battle.
Influences
Matthew 6:2 (KJV)
Therefore when thou doest thine alms, do not sound a trumpet before thee, as the hypocrites do in the synagogues and in the streets, that they may have glory of men. Verily I say unto you, They have their reward.
Changes
Simple English
They set up their tents in the valley of Corihor. Coriantumr set up his tents in the valley of Shurr. The valley of Shurr was near the hill Comnor. So Coriantumr gathered his armies together on the hill Comnor. He blew a trumpet to invite Shiz’s armies to come fight.
Paraphrase
They set up camp in the valley of Corihor. Coriantumr camped in the valley of Shurr, near the hill Comnor. He gathered his armies on that hill and sounded a trumpet, challenging Shiz to battle.