The Book of Mormon

Ether 14:21

1830 Edition

And so great and lasting had been the war, and so long had been the scene of bloodshed and carnage, that the whole face of the land was covered with the bodies of the dead;

Changes

And so great and lasting had been the war, and so long had been the scene of bloodshed and carnage, that the whole face of the land was covered with the bodies of the dead;.

Simple English

The war had been so great and so long. There had been so much killing that the whole land was covered with dead bodies.

Paraphrase

The war had dragged on so long, and the slaughter had been so relentless, that corpses covered the entire land.