Alma 56:10
1830 Edition
And I did join my two thousand sons, (for they are worthy to be called sons,) to the army of Antipus; in the which strength Antipus did rejoice exceedingly; for behold, his army had been reduced by the Lamanites because of the numerority of their forces having slain a vast number of our men; for which cause we have to mourn.
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Simple English
I brought my 2,000 sons to join the army of Antipus. They deserve to be called sons. Antipus was very happy about this. His army had gotten smaller because the Lamanites had killed many of our men. This made us very sad.
Paraphrase
“I joined my two thousand sons—and they’re worthy of being called sons—to Antipus’s army. He was thrilled with the reinforcements, because the Lamanites had devastated his forces. They’d killed so many of our people that we had real reason to grieve.”