The Book of Mormon

Alma 43:54

1830 Edition

Now Moroni, when he saw their terror, he commanded his men that they should stop shedding their blood.

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Now Moroni, when he saw their terror, he commanded his men that they should stop shedding their blood.

Simple English

When Moroni saw their fear, he told his men to stop killing them.

Paraphrase

When Moroni saw their fear, he commanded his men to stop the killing.