The Book of Mormon

Alma 22:23

1830 Edition

Now this was done in the presence of the queen, and many of the servants. And when they saw it, they greatly marvelled, and began to fear. And the king stood forth and began to minister unto them. And he did minister unto them insomuch that his whole household were converted unto the Lord.

Changes

Now this was done in the presence of the queen, and many of the servants. And when they saw it, they greatly marvelled, and began to fear. And the king stood forth, and began to minister unto them. And he did minister unto them, insomuch that his whole household were converted unto the Lord.

Simple English

This was done in front of the queen and many of the servants. When they saw it, they were amazed. They began to be scared. The king stood up and began to teach them. He taught them so much that his whole household believed in the Lord.

Paraphrase

This happened right in front of the queen and many servants. When they saw it, they were amazed and began to be afraid. The king stepped forward and started teaching them. He taught them so powerfully that his entire household converted to the Lord.