Alma 11:35
1830 Edition
Now Zeezrom saith unto the people, See that ye remember these things; for he saith there is but one God; yet he saith that the Son of God shall come, but he shall not save his people, as though he had authority to command God.
Changes
Now Zeezrom saithd unto the people,: See that ye remember these things; for he saithd there is but one God; yet he saith that the Son of God shall come, but he shall not save his people, —as though he had authority to command God.
Simple English
Zeezrom said to the people: “Remember what he is saying. He says there is only one God. But he says the Son of God will come. But he will not save his people. He talks like he can tell God what to do.”
Paraphrase
Then Zeezrom turned to the crowd: “Remember what he’s saying! He says there’s only one God, but then he says the Son of God is coming—yet he won’t save his people. Sounds like he thinks he can boss God around.”