3 Nephi 8:6
1830 Edition
and there was also a great and terrible tempest; and there was terrible thunder, insomuch that it did shake the whole earth as if it was about to divide asunder;
Changes
Simple English
The storm was terrible. Thunder shook the whole earth. It felt like the earth was going to split apart.
Paraphrase
A violent tempest came with it. Thunder so terrible it shook the whole earth as if it might split apart.