The Book of Mormon

1 Nephi 8:30

1830 Edition

But, to be short in writing: Behold, he saw other multitudes pressing forward; and they came and caught hold of the end of the rod of iron; and they did press their way forward, continually holding fast to the rod of iron, until they came forth and fell down, and partook of the fruit of the tree.

Changes

But, to be short in writing:, Bbehold, he saw other multitudes pressing forward; and they came and caught hold of the end of the rod of iron; and they did press their way forward, continually holding fast to the rod of iron, until they came forth and fell down, and partook of the fruit of the tree.

Simple English

To keep this short: He saw other crowds pushing forward. They came and grabbed hold of the end of the iron rod. They kept moving forward, always holding onto the iron rod, until they came out, fell down, and ate the fruit of the tree.

Paraphrase

To keep this brief: He saw more crowds pressing forward. They grabbed the iron rod and held tight, never letting go until they reached the tree and ate its fruit.