1 Nephi 8:23
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that there arose a mist of darkness; yea, even an exceeding great mist of darkness, insomuch that they which had commenced in the path, did lose their way, that they wandered off, and were lost.
Changes
And it came to pass that there arose a mist of darkness; yea, even an exceedingly great mist of darkness, insomuch that they whicho had commenced in the path, did lose their way, that they wandered off, and were lost.
Simple English
Then a dark mist came up. It was a very thick, dark mist. The people who had started on the path got lost in it. They wandered off and were lost.
Paraphrase
“Then a thick darkness fell—so dense that people lost their way, wandered off, and disappeared.”