1 Nephi 8:11
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that I did go forth, and partake of the fruit thereof; and I beheld that it was most sweet, above all that I ever had before tasted. Yea, and I beheld that the fruit thereof was white, to exceed all the whiteness that I had ever seen.
Changes
And it came to pass that I did go forth, and partake of the fruit thereof; and I beheld that it was most sweet, above all that I ever had before tasted. Yea, and I beheld that the fruit thereof was white, to exceed all the whiteness that I had ever seen.
Simple English
I went and ate some of the fruit. It was the sweetest thing I had ever tasted. The fruit was whiter than anything I had ever seen.
Paraphrase
“I went and tasted the fruit. It was sweeter than anything I’d ever tasted—white and pure, brighter than anything I’d ever seen.”