1 Nephi 2:16
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that I, Nephi, being exceeding young, nevertheless being large in stature, and also having great desires to know of the mysteries of God, wherefore I did cry unto the Lord; and behold he did visit me, and did soften my heart that I did believe all the words which had been spoken by my father; wherefore I did not rebel against him like unto my brothers.
Influences
1 Corinthians 4:1 (KJV)
Let a man so account of us, as of the ministers of Christ, and stewards of the mysteries of God.
Changes
And it came to pass that I, Nephi, being exceedingly young, nevertheless being large in stature, and also having great desires to know of the mysteries of God, wherefore, I did cry unto the Lord; and behold he did visit me, and did soften my heart that I did believe all the words which had been spoken by my father; wherefore, I did not rebel against him like unto my brothers.
Simple English
I, Nephi, was very young but tall for my age. I wanted to know God’s secrets. So I prayed to the Lord. He came to me and softened my heart. I believed everything my father said. I did not rebel against him like my brothers did.
Paraphrase
I was very young then, though tall for my age. I desperately wanted to understand God’s mysteries, so I prayed. The Lord visited me and softened my heart. I believed everything my father had said. I didn’t rebel like my brothers.