1 Nephi 16:18
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that as I, Nephi, went forth to slay food, behold, I did break my bow, which was made of fine steel; and after that I did break my bow, behold, my brethren were angry with me, because of the loss of my bow, for we did obtain no food.
Changes
And it came to pass that as I, Nephi, went forth to slay food, behold, I did break my bow, which was made of fine steel; and after that I did break my bow, behold, my brethren were angry with me, because of the loss of my bow, for we did obtain no food.
Simple English
I went out to hunt food. Then I broke my bow, which was made of fine steel. My brothers were angry with me because I broke my bow. We could not get any food.
Paraphrase
When I went out to hunt, my bow broke—it was made of fine steel. My brothers were furious with me for breaking it, because now we couldn’t get any food.