1 Nephi 12:4
1830 Edition
And it came to pass that I saw a mist of darkness on the face of the land of promise; and I saw lightnings, and I heard thunderings, and earthquakes, and all manner of tumultuous noises; and I saw the earth and the rocks, that they rent; and I saw mountains tumbling into pieces; and I saw the plains of the earth, that they were broken up; and I saw many cities, that they were sunk; and I saw many, that they were burned with fire; and I saw many, that they did tumble to the earth, because of the quaking thereof.
Changes
Simple English
I saw a dark mist on the face of the promised land. I saw lightning and heard thunder and earthquakes and all kinds of loud noises. I saw the earth and rocks split apart. I saw mountains fall into pieces. I saw the plains of the earth break up. I saw many cities sink. I saw many burn with fire. I saw many fall to the earth because of the shaking.
Paraphrase
Then a thick darkness covered the promised land. Lightning flashed, thunder roared, and earthquakes shook everything. I heard terrifying sounds. The earth and rocks split apart. Mountains crumbled to pieces. Plains cracked open. Some cities sank into the ground. Others burned with fire. Many more collapsed from the violent shaking.